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Babe
12-11-2006, 03:25 AM
this is what we got
In 2007 British Forces have been deployed to the middle east (Iran) after descovering 3 missles in Iranian territory. no papers could be found on the missles. Shortly after the discovery they found its target. After Special Air Service (SAS) regiment the 22nd SAS airdropped just out side the target they searched buildings and were not discovered but the 22nd discovered Irans plan to take a southern welsh RAF Base by firing this missles and destroying all living things in this base aswell as equipment and then move on to Ireland then march strait into England. In early may of 2007 RAF Tornado GR3's bomb the missle silos damaging the launch pads beyond repair, thinking that the Iranians would give up. Then in may 2007 Iran launches an attack on the beaches of Southern Ireland. The RAF laucnh Tornados and TA soldiers to defend the beaches shortly backed by a Regiment of Challenger 2 battle tanks the Iranians are pushed back into the sea with a high death toll. The Iranian leader Ahmed Gasheeid is PISSED! British politicions see fit to invade and capture Ahmed Gasheeid in an attempt to prevent another dangerous attack. The Royal Navy are pearched in the Gulf of Oman waiting to bombard Busheher and then release the vicous teeth of the Royal Marines.

The Rest is up to you.

BUT!!! we want to have more of a europian enviroment. So another idea is pretty much exactly the same but with the Ruskys (Russians)

Soduka
12-11-2006, 09:20 PM
In 2007 British Forces were been deployed in the Middle East after discovering 3 nuclear missles in Iranian territory. No documentation could be found on the missles' origins. Shortly after discovery, their target was unveiled. After the 22nd SAS (Special Airborn Services) were airdropped just outside the target, they discovered Iran's plan to take a southern Welsh RAF Base by firing their war load and obliterating just about everything possible, then move on to Ireland, finally marching straight into England.

In early May of 2007 RAF Tornado GR3s bomb the missle silos damaging the launch pads beyond repair, thinking that the Iranians would give up. However, in June, Iran launched an attack on the beaches of Southern Ireland. The RAF launch Tornados and TA soldiers to defend the beaches, shortly backed by a Regiment of Challenger 2 battle tanks. After an amazing struggle, the Iranians are pushed back to the sea with a high toll of life. The Iranian leader Ahmed Gasheeid is thoroughly angered by his failed attempt and swears revenge in the name of his god.

British politicians see fit to invade and capture Ahmed Gasheeid in an attempt to prevent another dangerous attack. The Royal Navy is deployed in the Gulf of Oman waiting to bombard Busheher, then release the Iron Hand known as: The Royal Marines.

Had to fix that for you. Great idea, but how you did it wasn't spaced or punctuated properly, and your grammer was horrible.

Babe
12-12-2006, 01:38 AM
i know on computers i have a lot of messed up stuff like that

no punctuation/gramma
spelling
Trigger happy!