[Movie] Special Delivery

[Sir. AAK625]

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Special Delivery

A short improptu comedy made by members of the Sir. community in which we see a guy very determined to get to where he's going, despite all the bad guys that seem to want to stop him. Watch to see what his ultimate goal is. (Requires DivX Codec).

http://battlefield2.filefront.com/file/The_Sir_Community_Special_Delivery;63765
http://totalbf2.filecloud.com/files/file.php?user_file_id=188572

The Sir. Community (http://www.SirCommunity.com)

Made With BattleLauncher (http://www.battlelauncher.com)

ENJOY!

Constructive criticism always welcome!

EDIT - Pic Removed Salad! :) and added a 2nd mirror.

[SaladFork]

Awww... remove that picture, it ruins the surprise, =(

~Salad

[xW0LFx]

dling now..

[AudieMurphy99]

Haha nice vid. :D

[Jofaba]

Sorry if this is too harsh but AAK's a masochist so here goes:

1) Already said I like the concept. But:

2) It's too long. If you're going for comedy then you need to cut in some stuff during his ride, make it a little more dangerous (some constant arty he somehow survives for example). There was a couple minutes where I just watched someone driving around. Didn't laugh. Wasn't unique if you're used to bf2.

3) Loved the skin but it's a little too white. Glaringly white. I'd tone it down a couple shades and maybe add some dirt to the bottom half.

4) I LOVED the recipients face.That was awesome.

5) The beginning when he says "roger that" is a bit akward. Most FedEx drivers use the walky talky function of their cellphones, and it sounds like its coming from a walky talky, so it sounds like the phone is saying roger that, as if the guy said something to confirm. Since he doesnt hold it to his ear, its akward and confusing.

6) The transition between songs is clean, but the transition from the second song to silence is abrupt.

7) You might consider using the actual FedEx slogan, since it adds to the humor and fits pretty well: "When it absolutely, positively has to be there overnight"

http://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/List_of_advertising_slogans

Overall good film, just some quirks. I wouldn't give up on it and call it a quicky. I'd give some thought to the suggestions I made and see if it becomes a better film, one to be really proud of instead of just having some fun.

[Sir. AAK625]

A masochist... Thank you Josh! :laugh:

Thanks for the feedback. :)

[-Darkstar10-]

funny video, the comedic rip sound could have been timed alot better but overall pretty funny

[Karl]

Like I said before, brilliant

[Sir. XaliaS]

Like Karl said like I said before... brilliant + a few extracts from what Jofaba said (which is much better formatted) than what I commented on.

:D

[Sir. AAK625]

For a 2 or 3 day movie. Good job guys. ;)

[Sir. Tasty]

nice work! love that van :P

[Xodus]

The van = pwnage

[signa]

nice work, excellent video quality. +

[Domo]

it was only made in 2-3 days, with a self hosted server and all british memebrs, i think its pretty good, well i would say that because i'm in it.

Domo

[[DEI]Bart]

nice but at 3:52 you see another fedex car at the background...

[TheEn|gma]

Pretty funny, especially if it was done in a few days!

[plugas]

Sir. AAK625
:( filecloud, filefront are most stupid media hosting providers
i'm waiting FTP hosting or Google Video streaming and i post good article about you video!!!

[BlitzWarTank]

hmm... filecloud is good! Im getting an average of 60Kbps which is quite fast for me as a 512Kbps user.

[Sir. AAK625]

We don't put our videos on Google, Putfile, YouTube, or any other similar streamer. It degrades the quality of the film, which is one of our main concerns.

[« R²» HKS]

This is going to sound harsh but sorry that was the most boring BF2 vid I have ever seen.

[Sir. AAK625]

It was done in like two days? A quick and simple comedy with custom materials.

It's a joke.

Ya know? Hehehe, hahaha, lol.

[RS-Rom]

We don't put our videos on Google, Putfile, YouTube, or any other similar streamer. It degrades the quality of the film, which is one of our main concerns.

Uhh..that's lame. Sorry.

[imported_SpungE]

Sir. AAK625
:( filecloud, filefront are most stupid media hosting providers
i'm waiting FTP hosting or Google Video streaming and i post good article about you video!!!

There ya go hun.

http://files.bf2s.com/details.php?file=425

[thelast500]

anyone know the name of the song??? plz tell me!!!

[Archer.]

Uhh..that's lame. Sorry.
Do try that. YOu will see your video DEGRADE, and get a bad rating.